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R. Scott Powell

Welcome to “Watch the Language!” Here, I will use my own experience and observation to layout the framework for discussions to educate junior and mid-level professionals. I implore veneered consultants to comment, expand, and explore the possible risks, liabilities and outcomes of the topics discussed. We all have different opinions, but meeting regulatory requirements in our technical writing ties us all together. I will not pretend to be a professional with infallible knowledge or a resource to all the environmental regulations. Anyone claiming such would have a line of lawyers waiting outside their door looking to pay off their home mortgage. I am humble and willing to take the hits as they come for my opinions that I share on this blog. I hope this becomes a good resource for professionals with report and regulation language questions.

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  • Time to dispose of this issue!173.0
    Entry posted Jan 08 by R Scott Powell

    English is our version of written and verbal communication in the USA (for the most part).  We speak it every day and most of us write in the English language every day.  Yet through all the practice we mess it up constantly.  Most of us here on CG review reports of one type or another.  Over time I have noticed a misunderstanding of a basic English language concept, verb phrases, particularly prepositional verb phrases.  It is a scourge across all levels of writers.  I am even an offender of multi-word verb use.  

     
  • Your pen is only as mighty as your words104.0
    Entry posted 12/09/09 by R Scott Powell

    The saying “The pen is mightier than the sword” rings true from ancient times to now.  However, more so now than then, the strength of your pen depends greatly on your mastery of words.  I will admit, I goof my words while typing quickly or forecasting my sentences while reviewing.  Recently I was caught red handed with one of the typo dreadnaughts of in the environmental world, contaminants (or how I spelled it contaminates).  I felt a little sheepish when it was pointed out, but that is why I recognize the need for peer or senior technical review.  So it prodded me ask everyone:

  • Off-Topic: New Job!4
    Entry posted 12/01/09 by R Scott Powell

    If you knew I worked for a firm in Metro Detroit... I no longer do.  I now work for a firm in the Pittsburgh area.  My new field will take me away from Phase I's and transplant me into remediation and design work.  I will continue with my blog though.  As I said in my general intro, our technical writing ties us all together, no matter what the topic.  We should always strive to improve our writing techniques and grammar... and I love pointing out the obvious! 

    Scott

  • Continuity
    Entry posted 11/10/09 by R Scott Powell

    According to Dictionary.com continuity is defined as "the state or quality of being continuous." 

  • What did you say? What were you thinking?
    Entry posted 10/13/09 by R Scott Powell

    Who has ever made an assumption as a consultant?  I’ve always gone by the rule “Assume and you make an A## out of U and Me.”  I have had the auspicious benefit of being present while a senior consultant reviewed a 1928 diagram and made an assumption what the depicted USTs use was based on the piping layout and general notes on the diagram.  The project scope was proposed under these assumptions, and the client was prepped for a quick and smooth closure based on the immobility of the assumed contents.  Low and behold, when the UST was excavated and soil samples collected… wow did they stink and scream on the PID (bad assumption).  If the UST only contained PNAs the soil would not have had PID readings in the hundreds or thousands…  I was in the position to observe and report.  After the samples were collected, notes compiled, and analytical selected, the consultant still stated the UST appeared to be used for the same assumed use from the 1928 diagram, and submitted samples for PNA analysis accordingly.  Only after some questioning by me (in front of their client… I hate to see innocent people stare incomprehensively at actives conducted on their own property) to “clarify” their field procedures, did they submit a couple of the samples for VOC analysis since there were PID readings.  The client was not happy since this was supposed to be quick and easy, with only a hand full of analysis (bad client maintenance).  The classic “You said it was just a #### UST and shouldn’t be an issue,” was stated by their client (bad client relationship).

     

    Situations like these make me feel bad for the consultant’s client, and makes me appreciate my training at a competent company.  This outlines the point that making assumptions as a consultant is just bad practice.  As consultants, we are here to provide the facts and assist the client in meeting regulatory requirements (and if we’re lucky to have a great client that is proactive, protect the environment).  Creating assumptions to make the situation fit what you or your client wants does not protect the client or you as the consultant. 

     

    Though I doubt anyone will post an answer here for themselves, I ask you to ask yourself these questions for self-reflection:

     

    How often do I go through the day making assumptions simply due to “That’s how I’ve always done it?”  Assumed your thought process does not need to be re-assessed, you have not looked for updated regulations, or evaluated yourself to determine if you need additional training.  Can I improve myself in that area I’ve practiced for #?# years and/or done a hundred/thousand times?

     

    Those questions are hard for some, but I find the best consultants ask themselves these questions on a regular basis, if not everyday. 

     

    To assume you know it all, or every possible solution, is to become complacent.  Complacency leads to no growth, assumptions, and errors.

     

    Scott

  • LUST is a LUST is a LUST35.0
    Entry posted 10/06/09 by R Scott Powell

    Open or Closed, a LUST site is a LUST site.  They represent a risk unless you have data to prove otherwise.  If there is a closure on an adjacent site… great, good for them… your site is still at risk.  Unless you review a report that documents the contamination is limited to soil in the area of the UST, or the contamination in the groundwater is not migrating to your site, the situation is a risk (REC).  Explaining this to a client can be daunting at times because of the adjectives “Open” and “Closed.”  As can be expected, a client will rely on the descriptions/categories created by the regulatory agency to be definitive.  Unfortunately, those categorical descriptions are not reliable.  This is where a consultant can shine or die.  Our ability to explain the differences between arbitrary nomenclature and reality, and more importantly the risks associated with the assumptions imposed by the arbitrary nomenclature, can create a life long client or (if you fail to communicate effectively or the client refuses to see it) a distraught client that may never return.  I have found the later is fine when the client does not want to understand, and just wants a piece of paper so he can move on to making money.  We all like money, but if you don’t understand your risks, you’re going to get burned eventually.  

     

    Whether it is titled “Open” or “Closed,” an adjacent or proximate LUST site is a risk that should be highlighted for the client (i.e. a REC in a Phase I).  You will have to use your own professional judgment and experience in the area of the site to determine what should be considered proximate.  (Yes, I skipped gradient, preferential pathways, and many other little facets, but I'm not giving a lesson here, just making a comment.)  

     

    Many adjectives used in writing are misleading, it is best to stick to the facts.  It is a LUST site, maybe it is “clean” = “Closed,” but the client needs to understand those two words are not mutual when it comes to contamination.  

     

    Scott

     

  • File Retention or File Hoarding35.0
    Entry posted 09/17/09 by R Scott Powell

    “Print your drafts on the other side of previously used paper.  We try and recycle everything.  Only use the new paper when you need to publish.  Also, place drafts with correction notes in the file.  We keep all drafts and field notes as reference and documentation for what we have done… also to learn from…”

     

    OK, so whose heart has stopped?  Did you stare blankly at those words?  Laugh uncontrollably on the inside?  Those were my reactions when I heard this story. 

  • Standard of Care
    Entry posted 09/08/09 by R Scott Powell

    In accordance with www.dictionary.com the “standard of care” means:  the degree of care or competence that one is expected to exercise in a particular circumstance or role.

     

    A question started brewing in my mind during the “EP? I don’t think so” discussion.  How do we reflect the “standard of care” through our actions and reports.  In the 1980’s it was whatever the environmental professional dreamed up, then it slowly headed toward local practice.  “What were the other consultants in your market area doing?”  When ASTM arrived on the scene in the 1990’s… it was local practice with some advice.  Now we have AAI, and ASTM-05 referenced directly in AAI.  Yes, previously we had ASTM-97 and ASTM-00, but not everyone followed them because there was no need (still isn’t a need to follow ASTM-05, most EP’s just do).  Most did out of good practice, but that’s the hook, good practice verse blissful ignorance.  Now that all consultants have been handed the AAI bible and told to worship and follow its teachings, does our perception of the “standard of care” need to change (at least for those who had blinders on and only looked a few feet away)?  Basically… If you were not looking to meet a national standard before, you better meet it now. 

     

    The local standard still has a play though.  If everyone in your local area is providing additional “out of scope” services, in addition to the basic Phase I, then your local standard for service may be more than other market regions; however, those addition services should not be considered the “standard of care.”  

     

    One person may take the “standard of care” to mean walking every inch of the site, taking 100 photos, sketching a scaled diagram, researching every street directory year, and other OCD actions.  On the other hand I’ve seen someone else drive by the site, take one photograph, look at a record or two and call it good enough for a commercial lot…  Disparity?  Just a little.  This is nothing new to any of us.  We cringe at the costs associated with the over achiever consultants, and shake our heads at the 10 hour Phase I’s for industrial sites.  Will everyone agree on a similar tactic to meet the “standard of care?”  No, not exactly.  Each EP has their own corporate and regional differences.  As Ed has highlighted in his “CERCLA: It’s just Federal Law…” post, for our clients to show they are completing their due diligence appropriately, they need to contact an EP who is knowledgeable in the regulations of the region of interest.  State requirements can augment the “standard of care” between regions. 

     

    Back to the definition above, I have yet to find a way for clientele to measure the “competence” of firms without using them first.  They could always ask for a “sanitized” report… but how many of us have ever had that request.  A larger matter would be, could the client recognize a “competent” report?  A few, absolutely.  The Users that are investing in real estate and developing sites tend to be aware of what they need; however, the majority of the Users do not have a full grasp of what makes a “competent” EP that can write a “competent” report that will meet the “standard of care.” 

     

    How do we fix this lack of a cohesive “standard of care” across regions?  We really can’t, but we can help Users become educated indirectly.  Start here at CG.  It might sound trite, but the wealth of knowledge already contained here, and the constant input of opinions and examples is a wealth of knowledge to Users.  Beyond CG, Users should ask some basic questions:

     

    Do you follow AAI?

    Do you use the latest ASTM format?

    How many AAI compliant Phase I’s have you completed?

    How do you identify RECs?

    How will you help me meet my due diligence requirements?  (If the answer is less than two sentences… run!)

     

    EP’s should educate their clients and Users to their due diligence requirements and the “standard of care” they take to assist the client. 

     

    These are just a few of the questions and thoughts that came to me while reading the blogs and discussions here at CG.  Yours are likely different, so express them. 

     

    1. How do you define your “standard of care?”

    2. What do you do to educate your clients and Users of their due diligence responsibilities and the dichotomy of practice across regions? 

     

    Scott

     

     

  • When do you call it out?
    Entry posted 08/31/09 by R Scott Powell

    Do you state a REC, BER, HREC, or de minimis condition in each subsection or only at the end?  The common two practices I have observed are: 

  • Phase I verbs Part 16
    Entry posted 08/18/09 by R Scott Powell

    We all see it.  They are in many reports.  The subjective verbs used in Phase I reports meant to summarize information.  To me, the use of these verbs let me know if a consultant actually pays attention to their writing and understands what they are saying.  For example:

     

    … the data shows...

    … the file indicated…

     

    These are only a couple of the common ones I see on a regular basis.  They are generalizations of reality, where verbs representing the actual actions taken should be chosen.  Such as:

     

    … the data listed…

    … as recorded in the XYZ file…

    … the file contained a XYZ report …

    … Mr. Owner stated…

     

    I’m still waiting for my data to “show” me something.  Since the reports I read with a “show” in them are entertaining, I always wonder if it’ll be a puppet show or a dance off. 

     

    Please comment.  There are no wrong answers, just educational discussions.  Regular commentators and myself enjoy new opinions and perspectives.  If your new to the blog I encourage you to comment with any opinion or question. 

     

    Scott

  • Analytical Methodology Limits
    Entry posted 08/14/09 by R Scott Powell

    Thought I would get out of the AAI / Phase I rut this time.  A small, and generally improperly documented, part of Phase II report writing is the reference to analytical methodology limits.  There are target detection limits (TDLs), method detection limits (MDLs), and reporting limits (RLs), among other descriptors and acronyms for methodology limits.  The analytical data provided by the lab is the RL.  It was normal for consultants to previously report MDL in Phase II reports; however, with today’s requirements on the labs and recognized variance in the data, the appropriate term representing the “reported” data is RL. 

  • Commitment to Statement6
    Entry posted 08/04/09 by R Scott Powell

    Well, this is a subjective topic, right?  I hope most EP’s think “Of course we support our statements in the reports we publish.”  Is that how our clients read the reports though?  Do you express commitment to your reports through solid statements?  How often do you come across a misstatement in a report, your or others (please give examples, we all love a laugh). 

  • Business Environmental Risk19
    Entry posted 07/21/09 by R Scott Powell

    We again will take on a topic I do not see often in Phase I ESAs.  To be honest, I have never used the term Business Environmental Risk.  Like many other EPs, I was trained to look for the REC.  The REC leads to Phase II, then maybe a BEA, and if your client’s good, a Due Care Plan… yaaay money!!  (Those last two were Michigan specific liability protection.)  So, I guess some of us (not all) missed the last line of ASTM-05 subsection 1.1 (Wait, is that the first paragraph?  I must have been tired of reading already.) “…an evaluation of business environmental risk associated with the parcel of commercial real estate may necessitate investigation beyond that identified in this practice…” 

  • Historical Recognized Environmental Condition133.0
    Entry posted 07/17/09 by R Scott Powell

    OK, so here is my disclaimer:  I was trained to consider the HREC definition to be irrelevant.  So, why do I now write about it… I now have the flexibility to interpret for myself.  Only recently have I been digging into the HREC for a better understanding.  These observations below are based on years of experience reviewing other consultants’ reports.  Though I did not use HRECs in my reports previously, I did note how other consultants used it and questioned my training.  

     

  • How do you say REC?83.0
    Entry posted 07/15/09 by R Scott Powell

    With the different ways consultants present RECs, I thought it would be an interesting discussion on how each of us presents it in our reports.  I am talking about the language you use to present a REC, not its definition (posted below for those wanting a quick recap).  Lets also skip HREC for now, which will be a subsequent post.  

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