
, last edited January 19, 2012We all see it. They are in many reports. The subjective verbs used in Phase I reports meant to summarize information. To me, the use of these verbs let me know if a consultant actually pays attention to their writing and understands what they are saying. For example:
… the data shows...
… the file indicated…
These are only a couple of the common ones I see on a regular basis. They are generalizations of reality, where verbs representing the actual actions taken should be chosen. Such as:
… the data listed…
… as recorded in the XYZ file…
… the file contained a XYZ report …
… Mr. Owner stated…
I’m still waiting for my data to “show” me something. Since the reports I read with a “show” in them are entertaining, I always wonder if it’ll be a puppet show or a dance off.
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Scott
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the most egregious term and the one that has gotten more than a few consultants in trouble is the use of term "reportedly" such as 'an asbestos abatement was reportedly performed". If the EP does not see verifying info, it should not rely on someone else's representation that the work was done.
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Yes, good point. We discussed this in Commitment to Statement before, but it is worth repeating! I will clarify, "reportedly" is appropriate when used in the context of summarizing a report directly reviewed by the EP. Other than that, if someone tells you anything, it should be "... stated by Mr. X ..."
Larry, lets discus "reportedly" for a moment, what is your opinion on a condition like the report we previously discussed. Lets not go down the road of ACM. To begin with, it is out of scope and I would not note ACM (even a report) unless it was specifically requested, and scoped. (RANT: I am AHERA certified with many years experience, and it rattles my cage when EP's make ACM commentary in Phase I's when they are out of scope and when the report does not document the field personnel's qualifications for making those observations.) Sorry, back on point.
Lets take the situation where an EP reviews a report that stated a UST was excavated and confirmation samples were "clean," but gives no other detail, and the EP does not have access to referenced report. How should it be documented to avoid the "reportedly" hook? I would try and be direct on my interpretation, "... XYZ report stated a UST was excavated... confirmation samples collected... XYZ reported "clean" confirmation samples collected from the excavation..." Some consultants would let this go as not a REC. Based on my experience, I want to see this report, and would call it a REC until the client/owner/regulatory agency could locate the referenced report. Now, assume the reviewed report is wrong, the UST is still present. Where does my statement fall apart and how can the client pin me to the wall?
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Unless you can see documentation that the samples were in fact clean or some confirmation from the regulatory, the EP cannot definitively rule out that it is a REC. This seems like a "data gap" flag.
With respect to ACM, it is true that ACM is non-scope and even when added to the SOW, it cannot be a identified REC but simply an additional environmental concern.
As an example, I had a transaction where ACM was included in the scope of a phase 1 done for a sale of a bakery. The consultant said there was no ACM based on the abatement that had "reportedly" performed. As it turned out, no abatement had ever been done.
After the client purchased the site, it discovered asbestos dust in its cake mix from peeling asbestos piping insulation that had been hidden behind a drop ceiling. All kidding aside about the presence of asbestos dust adding a nice "crunchy" bite or preventing customers from burning the pies in the oven, the client incurred a $2MM abatement and sued the consultant.
As a side note, it turned out, the main issue at the facility had been wastewater treatment plant malfunctioning so the consultant sent a water treatment specialist who did not know much about asbestos. He wrote the report and somehow it got past the quality review. Later when the case was ready to proceed to trial, the person who had done the inspection and written the report had unfortunately passed away and the former employee of the seller who had "mis-remembered" about the asbestos abatement could not be found. This made it hard for the consultant to defend itself and the matter was settled.....
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the word "significantly" in ESA reports will typically set me off the deep end.
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Writing a technical report is like writing features for magazines...no good editor will let a writer get away with generalizations.
Studies show...what studies?
Experts agree...which experts?
Polls show...which polls?
Clarity is key here. Your writing will improve if you back it up with facts and skip the generalizations. Expert writers agree.
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words are to lawyers (and writers) as tools are to carpenters.
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